My entire point of writing this poem is not merely preaching the fact that killing one's self is an act of cowardice or anything of that sort...For a fact an individual does reach to a point of an extreme mental exhaustion when he does resort to a thing like suicide...I am not here to prove whether its being coward or brave to kill one's self...All i wanna say is tat hey there are yet loads of people who love you a lot...so atleast for them think about giving life one more chance...
And last but not the least, hope Pink Floyd doesn't sue me for taking their eternal song title :P
6 comments:
well never knew benny was a writer... she pens a lotta stuff... aint my cuppa of tea though ... but hey the stuff pretty neat... way to go gurl!!!
okay now whers the bucks u promised for writin this comment
-Roshan
nice poem.. Binny Aunty! :)
Hey great work.keep it up.proud of you
hey gal....... nice piece!
a change in attitude can actually save life.... and your poem puts it across very well!!!
keep the good work coming...
looking forward to reading more of u!
tc :-)
Good one. left me askin for more. Jus a suggestion... The title can be reworked I guess:)
Keep it rollin;)
Much much better and way too effective...quite a contrast to your previous works... i see a maturity and dignity and a self esteem there...
very nice !
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