Sunday, June 24, 2007

Our Walk on the Shore





5 comments:

BLUEGUITAR said...

Great thoughts Ben, u seem to catch the relations very nicely and in straight forward words. Keep it up.

BTW given your love for rains, are we going to have one on mumbai rains ??

Unknown said...

your words really have a power to move. They penetrate deeply shake for a while. ur words prove that someone is there around u and life is beautiful live it, they can be inspiration for others.

Anonymous said...

heyyyyyyyy.Thats a good one.extremely heart felt.Very touching.great work.Keep it going.

Unknown said...

awesome... toooo beautiful...d last words specially...i'm left speechless..

LEVID said...

Well re-reading it... still feel the same... although..i'm not of a person to spend time on such relations..but somehow..i liked ur poem...it was not touching but it was simple and innocent...