deep n haunting..the only two words that jump to my mind at this post. first look n i got blown away by the image..haunting. a lonely lady sitting on the edge of a precipice..actually sets the mood for the poem in more ways than one.
this poem stands out for the utter simplicity with which you have conveyed the feeling of loneliness. and its so true that your material comforts can never buy you love. conveys the waiting n expectation of love nicely..
haunting poem..will rem the image for a long time..bravo!
For The lonely princess… U feel envy towards the maid but I feel envy towards u. all the wealth become meaningless.. if there is no one to share. The feeling “ I’m alone “ is itself terrific. I used to say myself “I’m all alone.. in the middle of a group of people.” And u conveyed that lines in a perfect way.. and my cheers with tears..!! I love it.
The lines . I have no man, no lover, no knight to protect.. shows extreme despair.. the fantasy abt the knight is wonderful. with a tear in my eyelash I hope , the princess wont b alone forever!! RAAdhika
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Hmmm Bravo!!!
There's a thin line between being lonely and being alone.
And I guess this Poem puts it across really well.
For some it's by chance and for some it's a choice they make;)
Keep it rollin;)
Nice poem speaks loads about your thoughts.
Well written! :) Lonely princess should use orkut, that way she wouldn't be that lonely! ;)
deep n haunting..the only two words that jump to my mind at this post.
first look n i got blown away by the image..haunting. a lonely lady sitting on the edge of a precipice..actually sets the mood for the poem in more ways than one.
this poem stands out for the utter simplicity with which you have conveyed the feeling of loneliness. and its so true that your material comforts can never buy you love. conveys the waiting n expectation of love nicely..
haunting poem..will rem the image for a long time..bravo!
For The lonely princess…
U feel envy towards the maid but I feel envy towards u.
all the wealth become meaningless.. if there is no one to share.
The feeling “ I’m alone “ is itself terrific.
I used to say myself “I’m all alone.. in the middle of a group of people.”
And u conveyed that lines in a perfect way.. and my cheers with tears..!!
I love it.
The lines . I have no man, no lover, no knight to protect..
shows extreme despair..
the fantasy abt the knight is wonderful.
with a tear in my eyelash I hope ,
the princess wont b alone forever!!
RAAdhika
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