Deep!keep it rollin;)
A little philosophical but still quite superficial. I'd have liked if you attempted to make it more poetic somehow. As with the facts therein, well I respect your opinion.
its really good poem i loved it
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Deep!
keep it rollin;)
A little philosophical but still quite superficial. I'd have liked if you attempted to make it more poetic somehow. As with the facts therein, well I respect your opinion.
its really good poem i loved it
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