Wow! At first look it seems like you are reading some lines from weekly metropolitan magazine describing everyday life in as simple language as possible so the kids can read and understand, but it's deep! Deeper for the irony, deeper for the emotions, deeper for the poetry (sleek and simple).
I really loved it. The underlying thoughts and feelings are greatly described.
I always like this ability of yours, where you portray the feelings so naturally shrouded in irony and it looks as if those couldn't have said any better. Very very great writer you are and as the time goes on, this uniqueness will be your identity, I'm sure!
First look, its simple and funny, with petty reasons and petty fights.. as u said. but it suggests a second reading, which shows.. its a wonderful piece. I have to appreciate first the way u did it. As a simple piece from day to day life. All see the same scenes , but the poet only think abt it . rt? and u did it.. u r correct life is all abt shout.. what else????? Lover to lover.. life to life.. u to me..?? Keep writing.. world is for u ( words also) Radhikaaa
I went through a couple of poems in your blog. Your poems have conceptual depth, but I see an imposition of rhyme, and tt stifles the natural rhythm of the poem.
And one question I have regarding just this poem:
Why Medulla? Is it because of the Mouth's Cradel track that you use this picture?
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Wow!
At first look it seems like you are reading some lines from weekly metropolitan magazine describing everyday life in as simple language as possible so the kids can read and understand, but it's deep! Deeper for the irony, deeper for the emotions, deeper for the poetry (sleek and simple).
I really loved it. The underlying thoughts and feelings are greatly described.
I always like this ability of yours, where you portray the feelings so naturally shrouded in irony and it looks as if those couldn't have said any better. Very very great writer you are and as the time goes on, this uniqueness will be your identity, I'm sure!
Levid
Dear,
First look, its simple and funny,
with petty reasons and petty fights.. as u said.
but it suggests a second reading,
which shows.. its a wonderful piece.
I have to appreciate first the way u did it.
As a simple piece from day to day life.
All see the same scenes , but the poet only think abt it . rt?
and u did it..
u r correct life is all abt shout.. what else?????
Lover to lover.. life to life.. u to me..??
Keep writing.. world is for u ( words also)
Radhikaaa
hey loved this post..woul have loved to call it urbania / urban mania..so captivatingly it captures the angst of people living in cities..
the irony n sarcasm is underplayed beautifully..
n just loved the teasing concluding lines..this is one of the best comments we have had on society-urban, selfish n insane..
keep it up!
I went through a couple of poems in your blog. Your poems have conceptual depth, but I see an imposition of rhyme, and tt stifles the natural rhythm of the poem.
And one question I have regarding just this poem:
Why Medulla? Is it because of the Mouth's Cradel track that you use this picture?
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